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September 26th, 2009, 5:58 pm

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First panel is lol (Its a photo)

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Reply eternalbeliever12, September 26th, 2009, 6:18 pm

I wanted to update two pages this week, but I dont want to keep you waiting so heres one for now :)
I like this page but drawing bedrooms or even beds, er.. way to difficult. How come whenever you work on a page you can only see the mistakes?! T_T
3o-s-knight: Yay! Thankyou very much. And wha.. Im so happy you asked, I will defaintly get a drawing done for you!! ^^

blackcatz: Thankyou very much, having loyal fans such as you is what keeps me updating every week! ^^

Theroah: Thankyou for reading.:D I usually shiver at the word "critque" but I am really curious in what your thoughts are. You can defiantly tell me your crit if you want.I may cry, jk (lol) But I need a kick on the backside, to improve. Does that sound harsh? xD You read the comic well, you were right on the mark about Kim. ^_^

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Reply BlackCatz, September 26th, 2009, 6:19 pm

your backgrounds look really good.. better than mine by far *shifty eyes*

ooo... looks like Demi's getting interested now ;D

Reply 3o-s-knight, September 26th, 2009, 11:18 pm

lol! doesn't sound harsh at all =] everyone needs to improve i think you are definately improving everyday naturally, some critique wll help you improve faster =]
HURRAY! i'm very exited xD; (sorry) I can't wait to get my drawing!! Dx
if i'm honest, it's nice to hear this sum-up of demi's thoughts on kim, since so far their meeting has been such a whirl wind, you get lost in it! it's as if at this point we are feeling as lost as demi. i agree with her, it's quite a thrill ride =0

Reply Living Rock, September 27th, 2009, 7:09 am

The bedroom scene is great with the dresser and of course books. She is probably going to dream of kissing him. Ha.

Reply Theorah, September 27th, 2009, 3:55 pm

oooh how interesting about Kim, I want to know more now! I like the bad boys in stories ;D
Well, my main crit is how your screentone and lineart is inconsistant in colour (as in sometimes its black, sometimes its a different shade of black, sometimes grey etc.) But its a mistake most people make if they dont know any better (myself included at one time)
What kind of program do you use to put it all together/add the tone? Do you have a brightness/contrast setting on the program you use? If you push up the brightness/contrast to a very high setting/to the top, then you will see a nice change to your comic. When you up the brightness/contrast, all the lines become pure black and white. This means all your line work will suddenly become the same colour and look more consistant. The screen tone will (most of the time) look the same as it did before, but will look a bit sharper/less pixelated, and will look more in keeping with your drawings :) try it out if you have that setting!
I really like how you mix different styles of line art together (like on this page even, the shot of Kim is very clean line art, but the shot of demi is all sketchy/rather in keeping with her falling asleep) but obviously when you do this the colours in lineart can be a bit inconsistant, I think the brightness/contrast trick would really make a difference :)

Reply Theorah, September 27th, 2009, 4:15 pm

oooh you know what?? (sorry if this sounds like Im interfering! ^^; ) I have some proper manga studio digital screentone you could have if you want! Its already pure black an white and its very big/high quality so you dont have to make it bigger/stretch it to fit a page. Would you like to use it on your comic? Id be happy to e-mail or pm it to you ^^

Reply KelloxArtist, October 23rd, 2009, 4:43 am

this reminds me when i fell in love for the first time

good manga !

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