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August 20th, 2009, 7:14 pm

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Reply eternalbeliever12, August 20th, 2009, 7:14 pm

woo sorry i took a while to update! Theres not much happening on this page, but in the next update things get rolling, hopefully!
It took a long time to do this page because i was trying to experiment with tones I wanted this page to look somewhat more shoujo and different, yet it still feels somewhat unfinished but I give up. I think i prefer less tones >.>
The backgrounds werent much of a problem though. hope its good >,<
Okies, enough rambles, i ramble too much xP

replies:
blackcatz: thankyou! I also like how Demis freaking out, haha

3o-s-knight: Awww loool, all will be revealed soon! X3

livingrock: thankyou, im happy the page layout is good I was worried about that the most XP

lazy_kitsune: Uwaa >o< Thankyou! For taking your time to read this! Hope you continue to enjoy, :D

And thanks to all who read of course <3

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User's Comments:

Reply lazy_kitsune, August 20th, 2009, 10:08 pm

I think you did a good job with the tones. And the backgrounds are amazing! ^^

Reply BlackCatz, August 21st, 2009, 12:00 am

I agree. Your backgrounds are amazing XD

Reply Living Rock, August 21st, 2009, 8:25 am

atmosphere The light pole and the wires in the third look great. If I were to attempt to draw that it would take so much patience. It's nice you don't just drawing "talking heads" but create an atmosphere.

Reply 3o-s-knight, August 21st, 2009, 9:51 am

honesty the backgrounds drawn are gret =D i agree with that~ this comic just gets better and better with every page =)

my perosnal opinion on toning is, not to use so much tone- however this is totally my opinion and not constructive crit (so hey, don't take it if you don't want to =] )

but yeah... imo, screentone should be used entirely to add depth to an already great picture- the picture should not rely on tone to give colour =] my perosnal prefrence are comics that use tone where it's needed. so in other words....i agree with you i prefered it when you had less tone XD

personally if i ever use tone in a comic, i always looked to 'honey and clover' for refrence, umino chika uses tone perfectly like that ;w; i don't tihnk you need to, your style and her style are very similar already- (hey mayve that's omne reason why i love this comic so much? =0 )

but if you ever feel stuck about using tone maybe honey and clover could be a good study =D

sorry for rambling, i hope it was ok to rant like that >.< by all means don't take my words as crit, i didnt really intend them that way, only a thought really =)

i know it sounds whiney..but i beeeeggggg you to update very very soon, i'm dying here ;o;

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